Dusk Runner - teh Jesus-Effect

Njeah, someone of you maybe is calling me now snotty, but I´m deeply not satisfied with this picture = ___ = °

the coloration doesn´t look like in my imagination, the parts of the background & the water should converge more - but they´re just stringed togehter sepreately X__X
´nd the water should l@@k like.. neh, completey different to now XD~~

so, this is the first version, I´ll drwa another version of it, this time with watercolour instead of Copic marker -
I´ll upload it then as another version , so be watchful !